I don’t understand poetry
Poetry is just not for me
I’ve tried my hands on it,
but the words just don’t fit
I don’t appreciate poetry
Every attempt is a eulogy
I keep writing about a girl
Then into the trash I hurl
I really don’t follow poetry
I’m handicapped, you see?
I pity each and every line
conforming to rhythm, rhyme
You say poetry makes life fun
But I don’t see how that’s done
Ω The Equilibrium Of Life Ω 
Pramodh,
The poem is beautifully composed. Although rhyming is efficiently done, the content is lacking in energy. Both the theme and the technique are important. Keep on writing. But after quite a few are written, look back and read them. You will find where and how to improve.
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Thank you for your constructive and useful advice.
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